I seriously love the way you wrote/presented this. It somehow makes the smutty stuff much more intense and creates a more interesting read overall. The 'mystery' of what was going on that Sho had was also amplified. Did you write it in order than break it up?
All the descriptions are brilliant and everything sounds just as amazing as the act itself was supposed to be ;)
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Date: 2014-07-19 08:47 pm (UTC)All the descriptions are brilliant and everything sounds just as amazing as the act itself was supposed to be ;)