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One of the things I LOVED the most from this chapter is Satoshi's anger as to who Nino was in his grandfather's life and how he had caused his death. I think it really is a believable reaction to everything that has been happening around him, even if he accepted Nino as an important part of his grandfather's life - he's still trying to refuse him.

And then there's the possibility of his grandfather's spirit in him and that...that made me super happy XD There isn't the love at first sight thing that I find in most Ohmiya fics, there's love that came from friendship between the two, and then there's Satoshi channeling whatever his grandfather felt. And I love that XD

last paragraph I swear because this comment is getting out of hand XD That last note from Satoshi just made my heart drop. You just KNOW the urgency they both felt, even if Satoshi's is out of obligation and Nino's is from that great anticipation in meeting the man he loves.

Ahh~ I can't wait to see whoever or whatever's there.

Thank you for this, love, it just made my dayXDXDXD I flailed when I saw my name up there *hug* thank you so much for this wonderful chapter