[personal profile] nilielh
Title : [Drabble] First
Rating : PG
Pairing : Ohno/Nino
Disclaimer : fiction, yo!
Summary : Nino was Ohno's first

 

Nino was Ohno's first.

He used to think how it came to that, but Ohno figured it must have been because Nino was his first love; he was older than Nino by three years, but it didn't stop Nino from chasing after him (at least that was how he remembered it, and even though Nino denied it, he was sure Nino knew it too, judging with the way the younger man blushed when he teased him about it).

He experienced his first kiss with Nino; the soft, gentle ones, and even the rough, messy ones; Nino was the one who taught him how to move his lips without making it look like he's eating Nino's lips instead, it was Nino who taught him how to use his tongue for the first time by shoving his inside his own and twisting their tongues together that made Ohno's head spin with pleasure he didn't know he was capable of feeling.

It was Nino who made him come the first time, using his hands and his small, talented fingers; Ohno was sure he would never forget the way Nino looked at him while he flexed his fingers against him, thumb rubbing insistently over and around his erection while he bite his lips.

Or when Nino went down on his knees the first time to put Ohno into his mouth, carefully, like Ohno was his to enjoy thoroughly; it made no sense to him then, but he was pretty sure it was because they loved each other so much for him to ask any question.

Nino also gave him his first heartbreak.

And the feeling was close to being drowned, like he's been smothered by something solid enough to stop his breathing, when Nino looked him in the eye and told him it was over between them.

He knew he had stopped breathing then.

But Nino simply turned around and walked away.

 

 

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Date: 2012-07-21 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] racanai.livejournal.com
So cute, I love it! ^^

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you..

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Date: 2012-07-21 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ylunio.livejournal.com
The beginning was so aaaaaaaaaw <3 <3 <3 (because I love first time's stories).. but the ending.. :( :( :( :(
Edited Date: 2012-07-21 10:30 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ylunio.livejournal.com
baby.. what's wrong?

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ylunio.livejournal.com
oh no! Poor baby *cuddles*
What can I do for you?

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Date: 2012-07-21 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ohmiyaplz.livejournal.com
this fic made me go from AHSJLKAHSJLKASH ♥ to ;____;

^goodness, I sound dumb. ;D

the end just squeezed my heart. OHNOOOOOOO D: NIIIIINO, YOU GO BACK AND LOVE HIM RIGHT NOW

DOOOOO ITTTT

aha, thank you so much for sharing this! c:

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you darling~

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Date: 2012-07-21 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] betzi-chan.livejournal.com
wow.
at first i thought it would be totally fluffy.
but the end... *teary eyes*

but i really like it.
sometimes it just needs not a happy end.

thanks for sharing.

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you dear~

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Date: 2012-07-21 10:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] himitsu-17.livejournal.com
I was totally in love with the beginning but then T_____T'
It's so sad the end ><
Poor Oh-chan!

Thanks for writing and sharing Jade-chan ;D
(Yay I'm on time for once)

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
yaay, for being on time! lol. thanks himi-chan :D

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Date: 2012-07-21 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moimoikurabu.livejournal.com
The ending was sad but it's Ohmiya. I believe there's love still lurking in there. :D

You know, Jade, you're the author of the first Arashi-related fanfic that I've read. It was Ohmiya, no doubt about it. I've never strayed away from the Ohmiya fanfic path since then :D Thank you! ;)

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
so sweet :D thanks so much love~

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Date: 2012-07-21 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] malena-tomoe.livejournal.com
:(... sad, but cute ;O;!!!!!!

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you dear~

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Date: 2012-07-22 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] j-sei.livejournal.com
like Ohno was his to enjoy I love this sentence, show how possessive Nino can be.
Sad and sweet moment, cute at the same time.

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you for reading~

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Date: 2012-07-22 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shinigamiami.livejournal.com
D: but but but....... it was going so well.... T^T

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
sorry :(

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Date: 2012-07-22 09:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gambitsfox.livejournal.com
So sweet but then so suddenly sad.

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you :D

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Date: 2012-07-22 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] platinum28.livejournal.com
Aw, Ohmiya... ;___; I don't even know how to react to something like this, to be happy it happened, or be sad it's over... but I want them together so I guess I'll be sad for now, haha.

Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you :D

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Date: 2012-07-22 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ady_arashi.livejournal.com
Waaaa so cute and the last angst part, i mis your ohmiya too (?)
thanks for sharing i'll wait for the next if there is any hehe ohmiya kisses

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Date: 2012-08-03 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thanks for reading..

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Date: 2012-08-04 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shilriarizz.livejournal.com
okay wait, you miss your ohmiya yet you broke them apart?? :'(

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Date: 2012-08-06 08:32 pm (UTC)
cleotine: (SK_kawaii)
From: [personal profile] cleotine
Iyaaaa! It started so wonderful, then ended so sad ;__;
But it's amazing! Thank you~

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