[Fic] Captain Says - Take 2

[nilielh]

Title : Captain says
Author : Jadey
Pairing : Yama (Ohno/Sho)
Rating : R
Disclaimer : fiction, yo!
Note : second to the last fic I wrote for the JEANONFICMEME. First Part HERE


 

"Satoshi, Satoshi," Sho hums and the sound of his voice is so low he isn't sure if Ohno heard him, but then it doesn't really matter, not anymore when he sees the way it drives Ohno a little crazy as he watches him pleasure himself.

He's not really sure if this is the right way to go about with things but he guesses that as long he's got Ohno's undivided attention on him, he's gonna go for it.

"From the base," Ohno says after a little while, the older man's own fingers are poised in between his legs and rubbing gently. Sho's mouth goes dry when he hears the tell-tale sound of Ohno's zipper being tugged down, and the way Ohno takes his erection out of his boxers without breaking their gazes. "Rub slowly, from the base to the tip, Sho-kun," Ohno adds, doing to himself exactly what he is instructing thus effectively robbing Sho the ability to think straight.

Sho does what he is told and grips himself a little too firmly, moaning in time with Ohno's low hiss as Ohno does the same. Sho pinches the head of his length, thumbing at the slit which is then starting to get a little too wet as he thrust against his own palm.

"Like this?" he asks around a nervous smile and enjoying the way it almost drives Ohno a bit more crazy, most especially when he rolls his hips in time with the pump of his hand around himself. Ohno gasps sharply, and it is only then that Sho realizes that Ohno is already standing up, teeth biting into his lower lip as he strides forward to grab Sho around his elbow.

Sho's hands still on himself as he stares at Ohno. "Errr, something wrong?" he asks, feeling kind of nervous that maybe he's doing wrong and that Ohno thinks he's had enough, god forbid.

Ohno smiles that usual gentle smile of his and completely contradicting his next move as he leans in to nip at Sho's pulse point. 

"Nothing," Ohno replies, applying a light suction at that particular spot and making Sho's head spin with desire. "I just think that since we're both kind of so into this, why don't we make this a little more enjoyable." he says.

Sho feels his relief bubble into the surface, but not quite when Ohno tugs him down with him, pressing him firmly across the shoulder and settling him down in between Ohno's legs.

"W-What --?" Sho starts to question, but then Ohno has this way of shutting anyone up by cupping Sho cheek and kissing Sho's mouth softly. 

Ohno smirk as he guides Sho's hand around his erection, and patting Sho's nose with his forefinger.

"You want to know why Nino's my favorite?" Ohno asks around an obviously faked moan, and gently pushing Sho's head down until his vision is filled with nothing but the sight of his leader's erection bobbing right in front of his face. Then Ohno leans down and press a wet kiss against Sho's ear and whispers,

"It's because he frequently uses his mouth to good use, and that includes keeping me and my cock satisfied," 

Sho knows he should be scandalized but he knows this is also his leader's way of saying 'Can you do it and surpass Nino's skills?'.

The hell with it; he isn't Arashi's second in command for nothing.

He nods to himself and reaches up to brush his bangs away from his eyes, while he braces himself over Ohno's legs. Then he looks up and stares straight into Ohno's eyes, determination set at the line of his mouth as he wraps one hand around Ohno's cock.

"After this," he murmurs, leaning down to trace the head of Ohno's cock with the tips of his tongue and looking mighty smug when Ohno all but breathes shakily, "Let's see if Nino's still on first place -- Captain," he says and opens his mouth, catching the head of Ohno's length and sucks.

 

 

Comments

[nathaxpen.livejournal.com]

I wanted it more, more of dominant oh-chan!!
but, OMG this is soooooo hot, no words :) :)

Would sho-chan be able to surpass Nino?? (haha)

I cannot wait for more!!

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

dominant Ohno is so rare but when he is, I can't think but how hot it is...