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Title : Reminisce 9
Rating : PG/fluff (will go up)
Pairing : Ohno Satoshi/Ninomiya Kazunari
Disclaimer :  fiction yo!
Summary : Young boys love. Butt grabbing and groping.
Beta : @koichiko


 

To be honest, the humiliation alone was enough to make Nino wish for a very quick death to come. Sadly, wishful thinking didn’t work that way, either.

He wasn’t ready yet, not ready for this kind of confrontation, really, and though it was stupid of him to be blurting out the words he’d said prior, there was no way for the older boy to reciprocate the feeling. He was being stupid and he was completely aware of it.

He wriggled his hand, trying to get out from Ohno’s tight grip but the older boy seemed to anticipate the movement and quickly stopped Nino’s attempt to get away. Ohno tightened his grip even more, threw one arm around Nino’s waist from behind and chuckled against Nino’s neck.

Nino gasped. He stopped moving altogether and Ohno used the opportunity to turn Nino around, his lips curled into a smug grin. Nino kept his expression unreadable even though his blood kept pounding hard on his ear. Nino curled his stubby fingers into a ball as he narrowed his eyes and hissed under his breath when Ohno kept a firm hold around Nino’s body.

“Where do you think you’re going?!” Ohno stumbled, feeling a bit annoyed at Nino’s actions. “Kazu please?”

Nino stopped moving but his body remained stiff underneath Ohno’s grip. Ohno sighed deeply and pulled Nino against him, until Nino’s back was firmly rested against Ohno’s chest.

“L-Let go of me..” Nino snapped, biting down on his lip hard. “Satoshi, let go of me right now..” he growled and breathed through his nose to calm himself down. But Ohno remained unmoved even at the sudden change in Nino’s tone, and instead, started moving closer and stopped only when their faces were a breath apart.

“No,” Ohno answered defiantly and Nino could feel the determination radiating from Ohno’s body. “I won’t unless you listen to me,” Ohno added and inched closer.

Nino drew his face back hastily, feeling the heat traveling from his neck up to his cheek. “Or would you rather have me show it to you?”

“Let go of me or I’m going to punch you in the face right now,” Nino threatened in a shaking voice but Ohno only tilted his head, his lips dangerously close to Nino’s and his fingers creating tiny circles at the small of Nino’s back making him shiver.

Ohno grinned but didn’t make any move at all. “Make me Kazunari..” he muttered, wagging his eyebrows playfully. “Make your move and I’ll make mine. Let’s just see who’s going to give up first..”

Nino’s head was spinning. He didn’t know what else to do, how he was supposed to escape this little game Ohno was playing. He had bared his feelings out in the open but he was not about to let Ohno play with it.. not when it was painful enough to be so in love with him like this and yet…

“I’m going to kiss you now, Nino,” Ohno grumbled. Nino’s mind goes into an overdrive and he quickly whipped his head aside when Ohno leaned in, thus Ohno’s mouth ended up kissing Nino’s chin instead. Ohno chuckled.

“I’m going to try again, so if you want to punch me, do it now..”

Nino’s brain turned into a complete puddle of mess especially when Ohno smiled in a way that was so adorably tempting and slowly inched closer, staring right into Nino’s eyes. Nino stopped breathing altogether, closed his eyes and waited.

“Wait..” Ohno said, pausing a little. Nino growled and squared his shoulder, readied himself to beat the crap out of Ohno if he as much as decide on saying something inappropriate now.

“Fuck you Satoshi..” Nino muttered through gritted teeth, his expression visibly darkened but Ohno only beamed back, pressing his body closer to Nino.

“Don’t be mad..” he whispered back and flicked his pink tongue at the corner of Nino’s mouth. Nino’s breath hitched at the action, his eyes widened at the sudden sensation. “I was just going to tell you ‘I love you’ first…”

Nino was most likely about to pass out as Ohno wounded his hand at the back of Nino’s neck, blowing warm air on Nino’s face while smiling.

“So.. am I allowed to kiss you now?”

Nino blinked slowly and nodded back. Ohno’s expression softened immediately after as he crossed the distance between their mouths. Ohno expertly moved his lips against Nino, slowly at first, like he’s tasted Nino’s lips for the first time. Nino tightly closed his eyes, moaning through the kiss and let Ohno took control. Ohno gingerly grabbed both Nino’s hands and placed it around his neck as Ohno’s own hand brushed the hair at the base of Nino’s skull. When Ohno angled his head and groaned, Nino did the same and quickly opened his mouth as Ohno slipped his tongue inside, catching Nino’s tongue and suckled on it wildly.

Nino pulled back a few moments after to catch some precious air while Ohno dropped tiny kisses all over Nino’s jaw. “W-wait.. w-wait..” Nino whispered but Ohno was too far gone as he cupped Nino’s cheek, muttered something unintelligible under his breath and kissed Nino again.. and again..

+

“Oh thank god!”

Sho’s voice vibrated through the four corners of their rented room as they both entered the door, smiling and their fingers intertwined. Jun immediately saw their hands and quirked his eyebrows as sounds of obvious disgust escaped his throat. Nino smiled smugly back and clicked his tongue.

“Where were you? God, I thought you two were lost, I nearly called~”

“Eh? Nino-chan, what is that?” Sho was cut off when Aiba bounced in front of Nino and Ohno, his bright eyes focused at Nino’s neck. Sho quickly moved and examined the thing Aiba was pointing at but immediately backed away when Nino’s face turned bright red.

“Awww, you guys made out didn’t you? Oh-chan, you weren’t being careful.. you put hickeys on Nino, see?”

Ohno on the other hand remained visibly unaffected and only twitched his mouth as confirmation. Sho gagged, and Nino wondered whether he was pretending or not.

“Now, now.. it’s okay Sho-chan.. that’s just normal.. you don’t have to feel bad about it..” Aiba cooed but Sho was clearly not satisfied at all.

“Do you want me to tell you what happened, Matsumoto?” Nino asked, enjoying the horrified look on Jun’s face. Jun bared his teeth back at him. Nino grinned in return and was about to tell Jun off when Ohno flopped himself on his lap, pouting.

"Kazu,"

Nino's chest tightened. “Oh-chan, what is it?”

Ohno pouted a bit more and Nino couldn’t help but kiss those puffy cheeks. Jun made a gagging sound at the back of his throat and turned around, muttering something indistinct under his breath.

“Hmm?”

“I’m hungry..” the older boy said.

Nino smiled and pinched Ohno’s cheek, squeezed the older boy’s behind and got up to fetch his ‘Hungry’ some food.

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Date: 2010-12-21 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] betzi-chan.livejournal.com
finally!
finally they got it and are together now!
*big smile*
it is really a lovely chapter. *nods*
and the reactions of the others are just too adorable. ^^

i am looking forward to the next one.
and of course your other fics! ^^

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Date: 2010-12-22 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you for reading dear :D

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Date: 2010-12-21 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mongo-o-o.livejournal.com
AH KISS! /dead
i like your ohno in this one :D

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Date: 2010-12-22 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
oh, hahhah.. thank you for reading :D

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Date: 2010-12-21 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nira60.livejournal.com
♥__________________♥
now I can go to sleep ^^
I love you so much for this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you for reading :D

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Date: 2010-12-21 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayarashi.livejournal.com
YAY! FINALLY! *dances* they Kissed! YAY! XD (can't control it, sorry XDD n_n')
Love this fict soo muuch ~ and this chapter was WIN! :D
Thank you dear Jade ^ ^, Looking forward to the next one ~
And the sequel of 'Come fly with me' too~ <3

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you, so glad you liked it :D

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Date: 2010-12-21 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaoilicious-53.livejournal.com
They kissed amazingly for a 16 and 13 yrs old kids xD

Aw man~ I can't wait 'till they grow up!!...and have a proper sex.. *snort*

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
oh well, FICTION dear, fiction hahahha~ thank you :D

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Date: 2010-12-21 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tayachan.livejournal.com
this...is soooo good for my soul ♥♥♥
thank you sooo much hun >////<
but I feel bad about the pressure I put on you...you okay darling?*hugs*

ps: ohchan should put even more hickes on nino XD

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-21 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tayachan.livejournal.com
ahhh I`m carey!!! not taya *tries to make her an layout right now* X_X

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Date: 2010-12-21 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ichi-toshimiya.livejournal.com
Oh God dear you really are quick... XD
And thank you Ohchn for the right answer... fufufu....

Yeiiiiy so you gonna make the seq...
I'm reaaaaaaaally gonna waited for this...
Happy holiday to you too my dear Jade...
And you gonna make and angst story?
*sigh* Hope it still happy end though...
See ya dear....

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you so much for reading :D

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Date: 2010-12-21 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] koichiko.livejournal.com
Oh my gosh, so cuuuuuu~te ♥
I loved that reference to the first chapter at the end!!

By the way, hon: I won't be able to check it today, it's already super late and I'm devastatingly tired.
But I promise I will do it first thing tomorrow.
From my first read-through I can already tell there aren't all that many mistakes anyway ;D

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
awww, thank you my darling :D

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Date: 2010-12-22 12:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moimoikurabu.livejournal.com
his "Hungry" is hungry XD

Nino was owned ♥


I ♥ you Jade
It's a good thing you're updating everyday :)
but being pissed of is another issue :|

I hope things go well for you :)

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
oh thank you darling :D

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Date: 2010-12-22 01:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chocoxchips.livejournal.com
Aw, Ohno put a hickey on Nino xD
He sure gets aggressive when it comes to Nino LOL
But I like this aggressive Ohno of yours xD

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you so much.. so glad you still approve :D

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 01:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ragenebur.livejournal.com
wohooo! \(^o^)/ yay! you made me so happy ate! atlast they're together! i'm glad oh-chan knows how to attack like that. i wonder what will happen next. is the rating will go up? haha.. yay! i'm so excited! thank you so much teh.

happy holiday! i love holiday especially when i have time reading your wonderful fics over and over again :D

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you my darling.. I'm sick today so may not probably post anything :(

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Date: 2010-12-22 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] momokan69.livejournal.com
Uwaaa!! You're fast!!
And God, Ohno 'moved' fast, too!! Trust Ohno to simply showing it with act! (and stop before just to say 'I love you') (>v<)
Can't wait for the next!
And Can't wait for the sequel of 'Come Fly With Me'!
Thanks for the update and Happy Holidays, too! (^0^)

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you so much.. well, im sick today so I may not post anything, gomen~

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Date: 2010-12-22 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pamelaxiah.livejournal.com
yay \(^o^)/
finally they together right now ^^
and looks like they happy now....
reaallyyy love this chapter.....
ohchan became naughty ne?
and aiba really easy to them
but,poor sho who confused about it and jun....

can't wait till the next chap....
and the sequel from the other...

thanks for sharing ^^
update soon....

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you for reading darling~

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Date: 2010-12-22 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tine028.livejournal.com
i really love this part! “.. make your move and I’ll make mine. Let’s just see who’s going to give up first..”
love the Ohno here...

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Date: 2010-12-22 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you so much :D

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Date: 2010-12-22 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yumi-usagi.livejournal.com
I was so happy when i saw the update. Thank you for the super fast update XD
I like the chapter the most so far. Finally, they're together. Oh-chan is so sweet and likes to tease Nino. I like Oh-chan in here. And shy Nino is always cute.

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
you're welcome.. though I may not be able to post anything today.. Im sick *sigh* still, thanks for reading ;D

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Date: 2010-12-22 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dorayaki-chan.livejournal.com
Awesooooooome , oh chan really know how to get his stolen kiss back :3 nino just stole kiss from the wrong or maybe the perfect boy :33 it,s like the best chap ever

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you darling :D

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Date: 2010-12-22 03:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] boblemon.livejournal.com
Aw, very cute! I liked that ending, with Nino being insecure but Ohno teasing him. :)

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Date: 2010-12-22 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you dear :D

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Date: 2010-12-22 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krapty12.livejournal.com
kawaii...i really love it...♥

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Date: 2010-12-22 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you :D

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Date: 2010-12-22 04:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vietnga.livejournal.com
They confess. And kiss <33. And be together <333333.
Finally <333!!
Finally!!!!
xDDDDD~


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Date: 2010-12-22 06:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you darling :D

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Date: 2010-12-22 05:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kokkaii.livejournal.com
uwa~
aggressive Ohno makes my heart flutter XD

I LOVE the dynamics here, with blushing defiant Nino and calm kind of sneaky Ohno.

Thanks for sharing~

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you so much dear ;D

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Date: 2010-12-22 07:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] himitsu-17.livejournal.com
*smile smile smile smile*

The working day began really bad, server down and I can't work until it is repear T___T

And now you absolutely make my morning! I LOVE this fanfic, like I said in the previous comment, so this one is also perfect! All the style I absolutely enjoy :D

I also love (that I didn't write it in the last comment) how Nino make Jun so jealous XD In fact I love Jun only when it's he love Ohno but Ohno is in a perfectly lovely relation with Nino ♥

Thank you so much dear ~

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
awww, I'm so glad you liked it dear :D

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Date: 2010-12-22 09:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jamiestewart88.livejournal.com
adfjakdjf;kajd confession timeeeee <3333333 *squees*
This was worth the 12+ hour wait. (I saw the update this morning, but with held myself from reading it until now. What a great bedtime story XDDDD)

Jun is such a drama queen and Sho is such a prude. I hope Ohmiya makes out in front of them. Just for kicks.
Love Agressive!Ohno Horny 13/16 year olds, I tell ya. (I'm pretty sure I didn't even know what a french kiss/hickey was when I was 13 XDDDD)

Another great chap! Thanks for the update!

PS-your AN/2 is like a Christmas present in itself. I'm stoked already XD <333333

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
hahahhah, oh thank you so much darling :D so glad you liked it..

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Date: 2010-12-22 09:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crystallino358.livejournal.com
oh my gawd...~ i'm throwing a giggle fit.. At a bus...~ XP
people staring at me,maybe thinking that i'm crazy....
Yatta...~ they got together finally... Good job ohchan.. So naughty left hickey on nino-chan... XD
LOL...~ the ending... The hungry is back... ^^
fufu... Love this so much...
Q(^^)m

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
hahahah, I hope you saved the commenting when you're alone lol~ anyway, thank you so much :D

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 10:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayuchanoh.livejournal.com
oohh i loved this~

Oh-chan was so sexy and sweet at the same time >//<


But i still think Oh-chan would be the first to confess :)

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
thank you :D

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 10:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arashistyle.livejournal.com
Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinally!
I waited for this kiss for sooooooooo long!
Have I already told you I just ove your stories???
Moooooooooooore!

(no subject)

Date: 2010-12-22 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com
hahahha, lol thanks so much :D
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