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nilielh ([personal profile] nilielh) wrote2011-01-10 02:14 am

[Fic] Reminisce

Title : Reminisce 17
Rating : R. NC 17
Pairing : Ohno/Nino
Disclaimer : fiction yo!
Summary : young boys love. butt grabbing and groping. general fluffiness and crack.  
Beta : @koichiko

 

Nino tried to swallow that imaginary lump in his throat, keeping his fingers from trembling hard as he gazed thoughtfully at Ohno’s throbbing erection. It’s not like it was the first time he had seen Ohno naked but the thought of putting Ohno’s cock in his mouth was doing something unimaginable to Nino’s senses no matter how hard he tried to control them.

 Ohno on the other hand looked fairly excited. Nino knew though that the older boy would certainly wait for him no matter what, because Nino was sure Ohno understood him much better than Nino himself and he knew that Ohno would wait for him until he was ready.

 “Are you going to stare at it forever?” Ohno asked, softly but eagerly, the older boy’s voice layered with lust. Ohno was propped up on his elbows, staring at Nino thoughtfully. Nino looked unsure as Ohno reached and wiped the sweat forming at Nino’s forehead tenderly.

 “Will you shut up for a minute, Oh-chan,” Nino muttered in a restrained voice, swallowing hard as he forced his left hand up and gently trailed his fingers over Ohno’s left leg. Ohno made a sound at the back of his throat and Nino let out a nervous laugh the moment he successfully managed to curl his fingers around Ohno’s cock.

 There were several reasons why Nino felt like he had to do this despite the uncertainty buzzing across his skin, but Nino tried to ignore it just the same.

 More than ever, Nino knew he would regret it if he let this moment pass by without trying. He owed Ohno that much.

 He looked up once in time to see Ohno throw his head back into the pillow, his plumped lips caught hard in between his teeth. Nino breathed in hard and cleared his mind, leaving only one thought: to return the favor and make Ohno happy the same way the older boy had made him happy countless times.

 Nino started by gingerly flicking his tongue at the head of Ohno’s cock as if tasting it. Ohno gave out a full body shiver and Nino was left gaping at the sudden rush of emotion hitting him the minute he looked up, seeing Ohno’s face twist into a very different expression followed by the gasp of strangled moan.

 “God, Kazu,” Ohno moaned, curling his hands on top of Nino’s head and guiding the younger man’s face back in between his legs. Nino shut his eyes and muttered a silent prayer, opened his mouth as he guided Ohno’s cock in between his lips. This time, Ohno muttered a strangled curse and Nino felt the older boy’s legs tremble while trying to hold himself down as much as he could.

 Nino wondered why he had been afraid of doing this when nothing about this was scary. In fact, although Ohno tasted different, he was also marvelously delicious that Nino soon found himself using more of his tongue, completely ignoring Ohno’s desperate plea.

 “Hmmmm..’ Nino hummed around Ohno’s cock and the vibration alone was enough to make Ohno come as the older boy gasped and tugged at Nino’s hair painfully as a warning. But Nino was already way beyond himself, not knowing how to let go or how to stop either. The taste of Ohno’s cock was something he had never thought he’d like and although he was still trying to find his rhythm, Nino knew this would not be the last time for him to do this.

 Nino kept his other hand on Ohno’s legs, pinning him down on the bed.

“K-Kazu, y-you have to, ah, stop..” he heard Ohno’s hoarse voice whisper, tugging his hair at the same time. “.. I.. I c-can’t hold it in much longer, Kazu, ah wait!” Ohno added desperately but Nino was nothing but stubborn and did something that completely left Ohno dumbfounded and gasping for breath. It was when Nino promptly angled his head and Ohno felt himself slide deeper into his mouth, moaning quietly and surrendering wholeheartedly as Ohno bucked himself once, coming with a shout hard in Nino’s mouth.

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 “Hmm, t-that was quick..” Nino commented afterwards when he was wrapped around in Ohno’s arms protectively and the older boy’s breathing slowly returned to normal. Nino felt distinctly grateful for being allowed to do those things with Ohno and for the older boy to guide him all the way through. “.. how was it?”

 Ohno snuggled closer and started nosing Nino’s jaw tenderly, brushing Nino’s cheek with his thumb at the same time. Nino felt undeniably ecstatic and the evidence of that was still somewhat obvious somewhere in between his legs. He tried keeping that delicious shiver from spreading all over his body even after he felt Ohno’s wandering hands on his stomach. He unconsciously batted Ohno’s hand away, reached for a pillow and placed it on top of his throbbing erection. Ohno chuckled but otherwise didn’t make any comment about it.

 “I asked you..” Nino grumbled half heartedly, feeling his cheeks warmed up all of a sudden. “Well, you don’t have to answer if you~”

 “I love you..” said Ohno in a way that made Nino’s heart jump up to his throat. He whipped his head and stared into Ohno’s eyes, his face softening visibly. “I love you so much Kazunari..” the older boy added, looking back at him fiercely.

 Nino cleared his throat, trying hard to blink back the tears that threatened to spill out from his eyes. “.. n-not the answer I was expecting but~”

 “Save your virginity for me when I come back after a month..” Ohno whispered and Nino completely forgot how to breath when Ohno promptly removed the pillow covering his hardness. “And be ready.. because I’m going to make sure you will lose it then..” he added, his voice layered with silent promises.

 And when Ohno worked his magic in between Nino’s legs, flexing his fingers until Nino was moaning and writhing underneath his expert hands, Nino badly wanted to ask the older boy to take him, instead of leaving him behind.


[identity profile] nira60.livejournal.com 2011-01-09 10:30 pm (UTC)(link)
kyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! he did it!!!
*will leave a proper comment tomorow ^^*
good night darling ♥

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:10 pm (UTC)(link)
hahahah, thanks darling~

[identity profile] carey-chan.livejournal.com 2011-01-09 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
omedetou kazu-kun ♥♥
you even deep throuted! and that at your age! my respect honey ♥
and o-chan...still has my heart >////<

*chu* your update had the right timing..i really needed some love ♥ thank you so much baby <3

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:12 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, love~ I missed talking to you.. i think something's wrong with my MSN coz I can't sign in.. *sigh*

[identity profile] betzi-chan.livejournal.com 2011-01-09 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
hot!
really hot!
*_____*
so nino will be a virgin for 1 more month. ^^
i totally love it!
the confession from ohno, let myself almost melt.


i can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^^

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:13 pm (UTC)(link)
hahahah, it looks like my readers are the one who are supposed to wait.. LOL. thanks darling~

[identity profile] yaoilicious-53.livejournal.com 2011-01-09 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
fuck, i'm not first again...bleh~

[identity profile] yaoilicious-53.livejournal.com 2011-01-09 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw....that....was....HOT..... the whispering part.....
;_: Why so good?~ ;_;

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[identity profile] ayarashi.livejournal.com 2011-01-09 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
aww Ohno you're so cute ~ <3
Thanks for this chapter Jade, i love it ^///^
Waiting for the next :D

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:19 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you for reading darling~
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[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:20 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you for reading dear XD

[identity profile] moimoikurabu.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:33 am (UTC)(link)
I think I melted. Oh wait, I'm a puddle right now.

(Oh Jade, I that whatever it is that has been making you sad, I hope you'll feel better soon - way better than you've ever been. Don't forget you're a wonderful person, darling and that a lot of people love you. Never ever forget :)

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you dear.. and I do hope so too~

[identity profile] rio-sora.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 02:17 am (UTC)(link)
yay! nino did it^^ hehe, looks like nino will wait everyday for ohno to take his virginity away....(in fact it was me....*shame*)
love this as always~thanks a lot! <3

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:26 pm (UTC)(link)
THANK YOU BB!

[identity profile] pamelaxiah.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
kkyyyaaaaaa......
nino did it ^___^
and he must save virginity for the next month...
although expected that nino lost it in this chap....
but,ohchan confession really make melt...
really honest and full with love toward nino...

thanks for sharing ^^
as always, update soon....

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:28 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks dear.. and well, I will try :D

[identity profile] momokan69.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 06:46 am (UTC)(link)
Uwaaaa!! (>v<)
Uwaaaaa,,!! <333 (I think my brain is gonna explode now,,)
I love how Ohno whispered to Nino in the end,, <3333
Omg, Ohno! Please back sooner!!
I really can't wait,,,!! (>v<)
Thanks for the update! (^ ^)

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:31 pm (UTC)(link)
hahahaha, please calm down dear~ thanks for reading, as always :D

[identity profile] ichi-toshimiya.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 07:17 am (UTC)(link)
Aaaah not their yet isn't it Kazu... *snicker*
But at least you know the test of Ohchan was so yummy e? *wish I can taste it too* fufufu...

Ow next month..
Xixixi... I wonder can you restrain your desire Kazu? fufufu...

Thanks for the update dear...
As usually I love this... fufufu...
See ya...

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 11:57 am (UTC)(link)
thank you dear~

[identity profile] dorayaki-chan.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 08:23 am (UTC)(link)
Uwaaaa I miss lots of your up date the connection is not that good lately X'( and my kittens got sick . But gyaaaa this fic just making me so giddy :) oh chan is like a damn proud teacher to have such a good brilliant quick learner student ha ha ha X)

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 11:55 am (UTC)(link)
that's okay darling.. and thank you for reading and commenting :D

[identity profile] arashistyle.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 08:59 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, my God!
You are a teaser!
How is Nino going to survive for a whole month????
Mean person!

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 11:51 am (UTC)(link)
im sorry, im sorry, im sorry XD

[identity profile] hopegrl18.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 09:21 am (UTC)(link)
0_0 Kyaaaaaa!!!! Go Nino!!!! yes Oh-chan take him with you and have ohmiya babies!!! ~flails, gets smacked~ sorry I'm a little sleep deprived right now so I'm crazy! ~hugs~

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 11:50 am (UTC)(link)
hahahahah, I hope that means you liked it.. thank you my darling~

[identity profile] midorinohana.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 11:34 am (UTC)(link)
Weee... Nino is so innocently professional XD
Though the thought of he-is-14 still cant get out of my mind.

Thanks Jade darling!~ I've missed u too~
*kisses and hugs*

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 11:48 am (UTC)(link)
LOL. i've missed you too~ you take care okay? mwah!

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[identity profile] himitsu-17.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:13 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG ~

Hum can I leave the same comment as yesterday ? Because seriously, I don't find anything to add! It's always this hot!

I love love love !!

Ah and your icon in you answer yesterday was so funny ! I couldn't stop laughing XD

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 12:33 pm (UTC)(link)
hahaha, which one? the Nino one? LOL. thanks darling~

[identity profile] mongo-o-o.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 02:21 pm (UTC)(link)
seems like nino is a natural at this :D
and i could just repeat my comment from the previous chapter:
NINO *____*

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-11 11:59 am (UTC)(link)
thanks for reading darling~

[identity profile] nakabibighani.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
ohmiya love before bed is purrrfect :) thank you *hugs*

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-11 12:04 pm (UTC)(link)
*glomps* thanks dear~ XD

[identity profile] wilstree.livejournal.com 2011-01-10 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
KYAAAAAA!!
I've been away and there was no internet.. so I just read the last 5 chapters now.. and they're just so ASDFGHJKL~
Update soon!

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-13 10:41 am (UTC)(link)
thank you for reading and commenting dear~

[identity profile] ayuchanoh.livejournal.com 2011-01-11 01:50 pm (UTC)(link)
go ohchan go!!!

ahaha lucky nino XD

Thanks for sharing :)

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-13 10:41 am (UTC)(link)
thanks dear :D

[identity profile] ragenebur.livejournal.com 2011-01-12 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I MISSED YOU *pout* i was having a hard time at school and in the bank and there's no ohmiya fic from you that inspires me. and ofcourse dont forget the rumor. :( i'm sick now partly because of that. sorry this was supposed to be a comment for the fic but i started this with a rant...


my point is i'm so happy when i read this chapter, it took all my pains away. ^__^ seriously. i've always loved your blowjob galore ^^

thanks for this ate ^^
ahm... why are you disappointed?

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-13 10:40 am (UTC)(link)
ikaw ha, hehehehe.. pahinga muna ko ngaun dear. medyo dumudugo na ung utak ko eh hahahha. but i will try to write something, malay mo makapag post ako before ako magstart ng work, hehe..

yeah, Do! okay na ung visa ko, hopefully next week magstart na ko ng work.. im so happy. mabait talaga ang Ama.

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[identity profile] saru-k.livejournal.com 2011-01-14 01:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow... Nino succeed!... he even deep throated!
so hooot.... and sweet at the ending... siriously i loved it!

And this almost kill me...
“.. save your virginity for when I come back after a month..” Ohno whispered and Nino completely forgot how to breath when Ohno promptly removed the pillow covering his hardness...

sorry for the delay ... ♥

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks darling :D

[identity profile] fancyann1974.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
yeah!!!!nino did it and loved it :)
cant wait to see what happens next
thank you so much for sharing

[identity profile] jade-lil.livejournal.com 2011-01-18 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you for reading darling~

[identity profile] kazusato.livejournal.com 2012-12-19 12:56 pm (UTC)(link)
:DDDD
omedetou, kazu-chan! hahaha

neeext!!!
i'm halfway there~
omg. 9pm! time~ please! don't fly so fast! >.<

thank you very much!!! :****

[identity profile] ruri-08.livejournal.com 2015-04-18 01:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesomely hot! I love you so much too Oh-chan and Neener! <3