[Fic] Forever

[nilielh]

Title : [Fic] Forever 4
Rating : PG
Pairing  : Ohno/Nino
Disclaimer :  fiction yo!
Wordcount: 1, 209 words
Summary : What would you do if the person you knew was destined for you happened to live decades before you and died even before the two of you met? Can love surpass the hands of time and eventually brings two destined hearts together after all?
Note : Needs revising?

One final look around his room, Ohno let himself out quietly. He clutched the painting against his chest, trying hard not to choke with the thought of running away from home just to be able to fulfill a promise. A promise he’s not even sure if he’s still supposed to keep. But only one thing’s for sure.. he’s doing this for Nino. And that practically answered every little doubt he had within himself.

He then tiptoed to his parent’s bedroom. He opened the door quietly and paid his parents one parting glance, bowing in apology and closes the door before him again silently.

“I’m so sorry Mom..” he muttered under his breath, resisting the urge to cry even though that’s what he felt like doing for the most part.

He had at least half an hour to reach the nearest station and four hours max to reach Tokyo. Ohno couldn’t help but let out a satisfied smile thinking of the possibility of seeing Nino in the flesh for the first time. Most especially now that Christmas is just around the corner. The painting should be the perfect gift for his Nino.

His Nino.

For the past few months, there was no denying that he had fell for the man. It was weird at first, but Ohno couldn’t possibly get him out of his mind and when he suddenly stopped writing back, he knew he had to find him. He had to do something just to make sure that Nino is okay. And the first thing to do is to come to him, even if it takes all of his courage and earning his mother’s wrath in the end by doing so.

*

Exactly one and a half hour after he had boarded the train, Ohno felt that overwhelming sense of fear.

He knew there was something really off. It was the first time he traveled alone and Ohno knew that that isn’t the reason why he had this strong feeling that something bad was about to happen. He looks around, still clutching the painting close to his chest and observing his fellow passengers with that wild look in his eyes. His chest started pounding hard and his palms started sweating profusely.

It was half past four in the morning and outside, it was still pitch dark. He couldn’t see a thing and he couldn’t even woke the other passenger’s up just because he happened to be freaking out about something he doesn’t even know what.

Exactly five minutes later, there was a loud crashing sound and Ohno felt himself being slammed hard on the window before everything went black around him.

*

“Y-You’re joking, r-right?”

There’s that same look on the older woman’s eyes again and Nino didn't know whether to believe everything he’d just heard or if it’s even remotely possible for those things to happen in such normal circumstances.

The onslaught of emotions hitting him from every side was just too hard to ignore. And Nino never knew he’d ever experienced freaking out and almost crying his guts out at the same time because of the intense pain he’s feeling at that very moment.

First, the Ohno he met two years ago was already dead.

Second, that the dates Ohno had written in those letters he had sent him were all true.

“I don’t know what you’re saying~”

“You are Ninomiya Kazunari right?” the older woman paused and stared at Nino pointedly. Nino nodded. “.. and you are that same boy who wrote these other letters too, right?” she added, pointing at the bunch of letters scattered on top of the coffee table. He nodded again. He saw Aiba motioning something at the corner of his eyes but Nino was too creep out to even care. “.. to tell you honestly Ninomiya-kun..” she said, her voice suddenly sounded very  tired. “.. I don’t understand how that happened either..”

“B-But, but~”

“.. he died almost seventy years ago, Ninomiya-kun..” she said, cutting his words off. “.. the train he boarded that same day met an accident and my brother was one of the many who didn’t make it.”

Nino was obviously shaking to his toes, not knowing how to believe the things he just discovered. The man holding the older woman tightly on the shoulder kept a steady glance on Nino’s face, his eyes intensely curious.

Nino grabbed the painting and unwrapped it in front of them, his hands trembling. “This! This was sent to me a few days ago.. and this was from him.. he promised to give this painting to me on my birthday.. h-how.. w-why..”

The older woman shook her head understandingly. “I can’t answer that, dear..” she said. “.. I saw that painting once before, and when I asked him, he said that it’s a gift for his friend’s birthday.. we didn’t know about the things you two talked about but I was pretty sure my brother was always happy when he received letters from you. The minute you stopped writing back, that’s when he started thinking of visiting you. But our mother firmly refused it. The day it happened, Satoshi left home without telling any of us.. leaving us only a letter saying that he’s going to meet you..” she paused and handed Nino that same letter she was talking about. Then she smiled blithely.  “..about that painting.. maybe, he just made sure to fulfill that promise he made you before..”

“Nino-chan..”

Aiba’s throaty voice calls out for him and Nino couldn’t find the strength to reach out onto the taller man’s grip as he fell from his seat, his tears blinding him. Then he felt Aiba’s arms around him, wrapping him into a tight embrace as Nino started sobbing quietly against his friend’s chest.

“Aiba-chan..” he wailed painfully. “.. Satoshi’s gone.. he’s gone.. what am I going to do now?” Aiba stroked his back without a word and Nino felt his world crashing down on him every fucking second after that painful realization.

*

“W-We’re very sorry for the trouble..”

She waved his hand and smiled. Nino then noticed the young man standing just beside her, staring back at him quizzically. Nino bowed politely.

“..I’m sorry, I wasn’t able to get your son’s name?” Nino asked, throwing the man a knowing smile. Nino felt baffled because he didn’t even smile one bit while the older woman looked up at the man beside her fondly.

“Ah well, he’s actually my grandson..” she said.

Nino nodded, still feeling a bit mystified. He bowed again, holding out his hand.

“Nice to meet you Sir..” Nino said, a little smirk started tugging at the corners of his mouth with the way the man stared at him. “.. my name is Ninomiya Kazunari.. and that’s my friend, Aiba Masaki..”

The man proudly tilted his head and flashed him one of the most dashing lopsided grin he had ever seen in his entire life. Nino felt something inside him physically broke as he waited for the other man to say his name but when he didn’t, the older woman smiled shyly.

“.. forgive his manners, Ninomiya-kun.. he’s exactly like my younger brother..” she said, quite amused. “.. maybe that’s why his parents had named him Satoshi after all..”

“S-Satoshi?”

The man grinned as an answer.

Holy god.

 

Comments

[himitsu-17.livejournal.com]

Aaah! I'm so happy that you have write the next chapter ;) I like this fanfiction! I love this story! It's so interesting!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! Sankyu so much *-*

It's my evening..., it's the third time I cry !!

Btw, keep me a place near you and Oh-chan in the bed XP

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

and I'm so glad you liked it darling~

oh, okay! lets both hide under Ohno's bed then? hahaha.. mwah~

[nira60.livejournal.com]

yes a new chapter!!!
I really like the plot ^^
Can't wait for the next ♥

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

thank you dear~ glad you liked it ^^

[ayarashi.livejournal.com]

YAY! Update! though is a quite sad~ i like it!! Really love this Fic so muuch<3<3<3!
Now i want to know what will happen next! ^WWWW^ ~
Waiting~ (: Ganbare Jade ;D

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

thank you so much for reading dear! i'm so happy you're still there~

[betzi-chan.livejournal.com]

yes 'holy god'.
nino has it right. ^^
i am sorry for nino!
*husg him with aiba*
but now there is satoshi. and i am sure this will not be last time, that nino saw him *smile*

i am excited about the next one!
see you ^^

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

thank you so much for reading darling~

[carey-chan.livejournal.com]

“.. Satoshi’s gone.. he’s gone.. what am I going to do now?”
*cries with kazu*

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

carey!!!!!!!! how are you??? i missed you so much~ mwah!

[kokkaii.livejournal.com]

my absolute favorite of your stories!
i love the timeline conflicts and the love that still flows between ohno and nino despite that.

There's alot of suspension of disbelief here, especially with the old woman believing Nino so readily, but then it FITS in the whole context of the thing where impossible things happen.

And then there's modern Satoshi XD Holy God really is an understatement, eh? XD

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

ohmygod! ohmygod! waaaah~ your comment, waaaa~ i love you, seriously.. hahahaha.. thank you so much for reading!

[fancyann1974.livejournal.com]

aaahhh ohno died trying to get to nino
poor nino, what that is also ohno
woah, nino must be so confused
oh cant wait to see what happens next
thank you so much

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

thank you dear~ as always ^^

[ady_arashi.livejournal.com]

kyaaaaaaaa
toshi nepew kyaaaaaa
OMG the stoyry is just to good ^.^
thanks for sharing kyaaa
im so happy jejeje thanks again i love it
i can't wait for the next ^-^

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

thank you so much for reading dear ^^

[rio-sora.livejournal.com]

oh....so intriguing! can't wait to know more~
thanks a lot! ♥♥♥

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

thank you bb~ how are you lately???

[tenshii-chan.livejournal.com]

ahahahahaah!!! kyaaaaaaaa!! yehey!! pinayagan na kong magpost ng lj.. finally!!

but honestly ate, this chapter made my brains go crazy..! i mean, i felt sad, bitter, and then when i reached the last part, i laughed seeing the man's reaction, and when nino found out that his name is satoshi.. goodness! i dunno how to react.

thanks for the update :) promise, hindi ko iispam tong page mo. hehe.

kain ka na ate.

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

okay lang naman i-spam hahaha.. :)) thank you for reading. uminom na ko ng kape~ what's for lunch nga pla?

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

hey, here dito tau mag spam lol~

eh tlga? who do you like sa Arashi ba? coz I only write Ohmiya, but if you can give me a prompt or something and who your fav pairing is, I can try and write something.. :))

[tenshii-chan.livejournal.com]

c sho :) haha. ewan ko ba, nino-baited ako eh. tas yung bday ko a day after ng bday ni nino.. haha, so okay lng kahit c nino at ohno :) since dedicated nmn saken yun

[arashi07.livejournal.com]

Holy god indeed! xD so what are you going to do now nino?? *waiting for the next chap*

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

*glomps* thank you darling~

[ragenebur.livejournal.com]

crap. i'm late.. i've been waiting for this..
so sad that nino didn't meet the original satoshi but i'm excited to what will happen to the current satoshi.. great job ate ^^

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

well, you're not really.. i just posted this last night.. i mean, early this morning.. whatever hahah.. thank you darling~

[sky-rain21.livejournal.com]

wait ,why ,whut ?
confusingggggg >_<
so the Ohno who drew that was the Ohno who passed away years ago (I don't want to use "die", so .... creepy >_<) and the one who sent the picture is the Ohno of now ?
uh.... *brain freezes*

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

oh, am I confusing you dear?? im sorry.. i promise to make it up to you ^^

[hannah-arashi.livejournal.com]

...... young satoshi?!? hmmm.... interesting.......

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

thank you dear~

[midshadow.livejournal.com]

An update!
Thank you for this!
I love the impossible relationship between past-Ohno and present-Nino. <3

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

aww, thank you so much for reading darling~

[itsumo-niji.livejournal.com]

awwww....thats really sad ^~^

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

thank you darling~

[momokan69.livejournal.com]

Yay for update!! (but I'm so late reading it,,) :(
This is so sad,, that Ohno already died 70 years ago,,
But then Nino met young Ohno!
So excited to know what'll happen! Thanks for the update! (^ ^)

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

thank you for reading dear~

[vietnga.livejournal.com]

New chap *yay*

The first part is sad ;__;, really heart-breaking ;___;.

But there's still young Ohno ;)). Nino and he can start at the beginning. However, I still can't get why Nino received those letters. It sounds like time traveler to me :D.

Thank you! I really like this plot, interesting, and well, hard to predict ♥.

[yaoilicious-53.livejournal.com]

Uwahh...so confusing but...interestinggg!! Feels like I'm watching a movie xD

sry for reading it late... it's just that...i like reading ur fics when I'm 100% ready..and not busy or anything...